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Out Of Auto Focus - Front by ~Kruszewski:iconKruszewski:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2007-2009 ~Kruszewski
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09.17.06

More of an experiment involving ulterior submission techniques.

I wrote this during a religious studies class, I don't know if that influenced the topic at all. Most likely just served as a setting.

The first of two. That of which was intended to be one.

//I was considering submitting this one of the two as a deviation, but I'm not sure. A general consensus would be a nice bit of motivation. I had actually intended for both images to be in the same deviation, but for this one, the front being the only one present is just fine. I'll have mutltiple-image/page deviations in the future, I'm sure.

//The category I would be choosing for this would necessarily be Visual Poetry, but that's where it's being pigeon-holed into until I can think of other ways to submit the scanned-in versions of these pieces. Categories may change in the future and a little help with choose which ones those will be would be nice.

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~songofthepheonix Jun 26, 2007, 9:45:38 AM
No offence but the handwriting makes it a little more difficult to read.

--
I blessed myself, so proud I've been!
Now I'm myself laid bare to sin!
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~Kruszewski Jun 26, 2007, 11:16:13 AM
I know...but I don't think retyping this onto the computer would give it the same feel. I wouldn't be able to properly recreate the shapes and things Ive done on the paper anyway.
Sorry if it's hard to read, but it was a experiment.
This isn't the best showcase of my handwriting and in future image based deviations things will be the way they are intentionally.

Sorry, as long as you can read it though...however difficult.
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~songofthepheonix Jun 27, 2007, 7:23:18 AM
Yea, it wasn't so hard to read once I worked out your handwriting, and you're right, this wouldn't be the same if you typed it. It's good, and I always like how I can read your stuff so many different ways lately- each time I read it it's different then before in a way. I like this peice a lot :)

--
I blessed myself, so proud I've been!
Now I'm myself laid bare to sin!
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~Kruszewski Jun 27, 2007, 8:17:34 AM
Thanks so much. It's nice to know that people are actually reading this nonsense!
Sorry about the difficulty.
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~LegaxEsom Jul 8, 2007, 7:53:31 AM
The only slight qualm I have is that your E's seem to look like G's. Maybe me, being the handwriting GOD that I am, can teach you how to fix that.

I like this poem very much, and I wish I could see the real thing, so I could look at the poem and the filled in squares as a whole. And the style of writing coincides very well with the theme of it, Out of Focus. I quite like it.

More!

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Art is showing others what you live.
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~Kruszewski Aug 4, 2007, 12:10:18 PM
we'll see.
Working with graphs was a concept of mine that I might go back to if I have the proper equipment and supplies.

You'll get to read the hard copy soon, I'm sure.
I want post more things in this style in the future though. So, you won't always get to read the real one...sorry.

Thanks for the kind words!
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~LegaxEsom Aug 5, 2007, 10:06:06 AM
You're welcome. And I'll somehow get through the pain of not seeing every piece of yours personally. Somehow. :P

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Art is showing others what you live.
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